WHAT A COVER LETTER SHOULDN'T LOOK LIKE...

For anyone who is applying for jobs right now a word to the wise. Reference this cover letter in the WHAT NOT TO DO catagory. It upsets me to think that someone who writes this way already has a job, yet s/he is applying for another job behind him/her employers back. How can this be. There are so many of us looking for work, especially in the NYC art market and here s/he is... already having one job...applying for another. Met, I hope you have better sense than to hire someone who can't form a cohernt sentence.
So for all those seeking employment... Read with caution. If your cover letter looks like this, change it and change it fast.